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rak03252
rak03252:  


just a little observation, how the world just keeps on going,
so we just keep on thinking...

WHEELS WILL NEVER STOP ©
by rak
 
temps and tempers rising
good things end too soon
never seems surprising
as I hear a fading tune
and I’m all done with climbing
never made it to the top
 bells just keep chiming
and the wheels will never stop
 
what of happy endings
not quite what you expect
some ideas are worth keeping
others you reject
 time just keeps on rolling
with a skip and jump and hop
no telling and no showing
and the wheels will never stop
 
does it matter who you once were
or now pretend to be
just seems to be absurd
this struggle to be free
with temps and tempers rising
something’s bound to drop
should not be so surprising
and the wheels will never stop
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rak03252
rak03252: i was actually thinking of the Dead song...THE MUSIC NEVER STOPPED, but this is totally different..lol
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Irishholly
Irishholly: Nice. I like it.
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EyzzBrown 11 months ago ReplyReport
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Lo0p
Lo0p: I so love tis
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allaboutbeck
allaboutbeck: Your words are so good! They are soothing and real! You, at times, bring back wonderful memories..and get to the point....while allowing us whatever we think or feel while reading your take on life. Another great,
thought provoking treasure, Bobby!
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AuroraNorthBorealis
AuroraNorthBorealis: And the wheels keep on turning. this poem. Thank you.
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B_R_I
B_R_I: Another good one,
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Grant1862
Grant1862: Good poem
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Chele1L
Chele1L: I can relate… nice poem rak
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RnKris84
RnKris84: Just got a chance to read this Rak. So true and beautifully expressed. What a gift you have. ❤️
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rak03252
rak03252: ....
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Stellaaa1357
Stellaaa1357: I have read everything you have written and I must say I'm most impressed I look forward to more thank you!
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Angel131313
Angel131313: your awesome
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