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rak03252
rak03252: ok...here's the deal...i had it with all of youz...
no more poems...u dont like it ?
tough
LOL..
ok..April Fools....ha ha
this is actually like 12 yrs old..but seemed fitting...for today and anyday


 
NO FOOLING ©
by rak
 
now who have i been fooling
certainly not me
with sword in hand
i'm dueling
i'm trying to set you free
can't predict the outcome
as fires blaze all night
just a matter of perspective
not who's wrong or right
 
life can be so cruel at times
i dwell in fantasy
where everyone is equal
the way it's meant to be
equal lives, not equal strengths
just the right to live and breathe
each has their own special gift
as ordained and as bequeathed
 
i aint fooling anyone
i move from scene to scene
and on each stage where i appear
i slay the king and queen
i help the demon get away
an escape route duly planned
he hasn't harmed a single soul
he's the sub-conscience of man
 
all these false idols bound to fall
their reign of terror done
ready now for what comes next
we orbit round the sun
perhaps we spin out of control
as chaos draws a card
there's an order in the universe
understanding it's so hard
 
now there's no fooling anyone
cept those who pray for rain
everything that's been is gone
and won't come back again
this journey won't unveil the truth
it may reveal some lies
perhaps there'll be a second chance
it takes a lot of tries
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EyzzBrown
EyzzBrown: Always inspiring.. it
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priskcindy97
priskcindy97: Excellent!!! Thanks for sharing.
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thumper196699
thumper196699: who said that , i look forward to your poems and i know quite a few others do as well , i think their very good , i look forward to seeing them all the time , some are very inspirational as well, dont stop writing them keep going ,
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evergreendr
evergreendr: Lol Happy April Fools. Nice read
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RnKris84
RnKris84: “All these false idols bound to fall, their reign of terror done…”. Gosh I sure hope so!! On point poem Rak. Thank you my amazing friend! ❤️
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pennypershing
pennypershing: Don't like your poems.
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pennypershing
pennypershing: April fools! 😁
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RnKris84
RnKris84 in reply to pennypershing: 🤣 Almost had me penny!!
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evergreendr
evergreendr in reply to pennypershing:
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rak03252
rak03252: so glad i have this place to share them...and so many lovely people to share them with
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allaboutbeck
allaboutbeck: Bobby....you write so well and you can collect things that make us happy....sad...silly and sad, and write about them in the moment! You will always have a place to share your wonderful, eye opening and ever so thought provoking works of art. I am so happy that God introduced me to you.
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kawarren0131
kawarren0131: Zbecky. I so agree with what you said..always thought provoking...
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rak03252
rak03252: no foolin LOL
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keytothehearts
keytothehearts: Bravo rak bravo 👏 👍🏼🫶🏼😉😁
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SunshineDeb
SunshineDeb: this is great
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OceanAngel7
OceanAngel7: One of your best verses!
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