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rak03252
rak03252: So many things,
to learn and see,
simply by watching….

WATCH ©
by rak
 
I watch it all
unfolding
like a murder
mystery might
I watch the sky
changing hues
much to my delight
and as I watch
it seems
I’m gaining
new insight
no more shall I
be deceived
I even
watch my plight
 
not a matter
of who done it
or if it was done
at all
seems these days
nobody cares
and there is
no one
to call
I watch it all unravel
all the dirt
and all the grime
hard to tell
who’s the victim
and what was
the crime
 
some go thru life
with blinders on
and cotton in
their ears
got no need
to watch the world
nothing for them
to hear
I watch as puppets
do the dance
as their master
pulls their strings
I suppose if I
had the chance
I’d fly
with the birds
and sing
 
as I watch
I’ve seen
good and bad things
happen
people party,
celebrate
I watch
as bones are snapping
where we go from here
I guess
each guess
is worth guessing
heaven, hell, or somewhere else
perhaps it’s all
just testing
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SunshineDeb
SunshineDeb: wow thats great rak!!
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thumper196699
thumper196699: nice rak very nice
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priskcindy97
priskcindy97: You rawk, Rak! Another good one.
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Irishholly
Irishholly: Fantastic. One of your best.
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evergreendr
evergreendr: ~~ We Are Only Puppets, Our Strings Being Pulled By Unknown Forces. We Are All Puppets In The Hands Of Fate & Seldom See The Strings ~~ Charles W. Chestnutt
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moonchildmistres
moonchildmistres: Wow. Really good one (((((Rak)))))). Thank you for sharing your talent with us. God bless and have a good night and great weekend dearest friend.
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OceanAngel7
OceanAngel7: Excellent
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AuroraNorthBorealis
AuroraNorthBorealis: Absolutely So thank you for being such an expressive poet.
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manof_darkness
manof_darkness: I like it rak
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MentalCaseBlonde
MentalCaseBlonde: great one Rak
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i catalyst
i catalyst: anyone know the word for a symphony of words?
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RnKris84
RnKris84: Seems like nobody cares....... indeed. Love this Rak. You are so gifted; 💗
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attydallas3
attydallas3 in reply to RnKris84: Nursie Kris {+];-) Was just reading an article that reports that the average nurse in America walks 5+ miles total during their shift .. WOW .. Does that sound pretty accurate? &:-) Paul
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RnKris84
RnKris84 in reply to attydallas3: I wouldn’t doubt it Paulie!!! 😊
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