moonchildmistres: Love this poem ((((((Rak)))))). Great analogy. As always, your expressive words move me to my soul. In this one though,makes me want to move and Dance! And, I did just that! Felt great and freeing. Thank you for sharing! Have a wonderful weekend dear friend, Take care and God bless you always!
SunshineDeb: Oh i love this!! Dancing in the wind is so freeing!! Gliding along, enjoying the freeing of it all, is so fantastic!
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To dance along the wavy grass, To dance and sway and feel not sass, But letting all the world melt away, While dancing in the wind. Abandoning the cares and fears Of social norms and social fears, Instead to let your mind go free, And dance along the wind. - deb
RnKris84: Rak a puppet with no strings indeed! I love dance. Any and all forms of it. Your piece reminds me of how free and uninhibited I feel when I dance. The beauty of the human form curving and melting to music…. It’s intoxicating. I always say dance anywhere that you feel the most comfortable. And yes…. like no one is watching. ☺️ ❤️
and the way dancing can make people feel...
DANCING IN THE WIND ©
by rak
dancing in the wind
like a wild,
unhinged leaf
going far beyond
before benign beliefs
dancing in the wind
like a shadow
with no bounds
carefree and chaotic
never touching ground
dancing in the wind
a puppet with no strings
footloose and fancy free
to the song
only wind can sing
and the wind
shall never end
the dancing
never stops
where everything begins
from the bottom to the top
dancing in the wind
to the tune of somber soul
on the airwaves
that you hear
to dance with no control
As always, your expressive words move me to my soul.
In this one though,makes me want to move and Dance! And, I did just that! Felt great and freeing.
Thank you for sharing! Have a wonderful weekend dear friend, Take care and God bless you always!
In response
To dance along the wavy grass,
To dance and sway and feel not sass,
But letting all the world melt away,
While dancing in the wind.
Abandoning the cares and fears
Of social norms and social fears,
Instead to let your mind go free,
And dance along the wind.
- deb