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rak03252
rak03252:  


wish i didnt have to write stuff like this..

HATRED©
by rak
 
I hate all the hatred
I’m seeing and feeling
I hate all the feelings
all the lies,
double dealings
 
hatred erupting
like a volcano full blown
hatred nurtured
hatred home grown
 
hatred is cheered
like a victory lap
bled into buckets
as trees shedding sap
 
hate anything different
what goes ‘gainst the grain
if there’s hate in your heart
there’s hate in your brain
 
mindless aint kindness
is your mental aware
why is it so hard
to show that you care
 
welcome your friends
and strangers alike
make love the goal
like a sound lightning strike
 
extend helping hands
united we stand
hatred has no place
don’t let hatred land
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Bri_Anna
Bri_Anna: Love it as always
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CathySagittarius
CathySagittarius: Well said rak, I like that hun xx
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TraehA
TraehA: Rak love this one ! Needs to be screamed from roof top to roof top✌❤🦋
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rak03252
rak03252: certainly does...i hate that its necessary...but it IS necessary(rak rants)
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A L  I  S  A
A L I S A: That was awesome. So on point!
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KeithJ
KeithJ: Kurt Cobaine could of made a tune out of that .
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sky_deep
sky_deep: Beautiful
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Emmielu123
Emmielu123: You have a way with words. Great talent!
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RnKris84
RnKris84: What a great poem for this time in the world.
I see this way too often in the rooms here on Wire.
God willing, together we can create a better world for our children and grand children.
Thank you for your poignant pieces Rak.
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AuroraNorthBorealis
AuroraNorthBorealis: This poem seems to speak the truth of the world we live in today. But, with united extended helping hands, we have hope.
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sandydustypants
sandydustypants: Nicevery nice
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SunshineDeb
SunshineDeb: Well written rak
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EyzzBrown
EyzzBrown: You express much of what some of us feel but are unable to put into words.
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fleetwoodgirl
fleetwoodgirl: You have such a gift of expression.
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bgizmo238399
bgizmo238399: Wonderfully written......
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OceanAngel7
OceanAngel7: I love this one!
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Jante_nut
Jante_nut: It’s hard for me to be around negativity anymore. It weighs everyone down. Funny I heard thunder as I was reading the line about the lightning strike. You are a very positive and caring person rak. Very well expressed!
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SunshineDeb
SunshineDeb: Beautiful!!!
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