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rak03252
rak03252: have this on my poem site, for awhile, but seems its hard to get over there,so thought i would move it here for now....
always nice to play pretend.....sometimes,
things are too real

REALM OF PRETEND©
by rak

this is the part
where all things
must end
and then we go back
to the realm of pretend
the reapers
and keepers
would never extend
a hand to a friend
in the realm
of pretend


and this is the part
where the good guys lose
in the realm of pretend
where one never
can choose
they take what they want
you must pay your dues
in the realm of pretend
you just stay confused


this is the part
where the fake
becomes real
in the realm of pretend
where you can’t seal the deal
you’re not even sure
what it is
that you feel
in the realm of pretend
where the visitors squeal


and this is the part
that becomes the last straw
in the realm of pretend
what is it you saw
no winners
no losers
call it a draw
in the realm of pretend
you watch the ice thaw

this is the part
with all things the same
in the realm of pretend
no one needs a name
there are no more rules
this isn’t a game
in the realm of pretend
who’s left to blame

and this is the part
when the lost
can’t be found
in the realm of pretend
they wander around
heads in a spin
eyes to the ground
in the realm of pretend
there’s no
homeward bound


this is the part
you’ve been dreading most
in the realm of pretend
that extends
coast to coast
the living are dead
the dead are a ghost
in the realm of pretend
from pillar to post

and this is the part
of sadness and pain
in the realm of pretend
where the sane
go insane
all the brains
have been drained
and the dragons
are slain
in the realm of pretend
where all shall remain
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manof_darkness
manof_darkness: Wow thought provoking.
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Bri_anna 3 years ago ReplyReport
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Ladybec
Ladybec: wow
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sky_deep
sky_deep: Deep and awesome
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WarriorMouse
WarriorMouse: Well written. I like it
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betsymilo421
betsymilo421: Nice rak
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shystorm
shystorm: beautifully written and yet painful as well......
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Princess Melody
Princess Melody: Lovely poem. You are a wonderful poem writer
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rak03252
rak03252: i always want to thank everyone that reads my poems..it means a lot ...and hope you can find others you might not have read yet...on my feed...might need to scroll a bit. but well worth it..LOL..seriously , thank you very much...everyone and
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WarriorMouse
WarriorMouse in reply to rak03252: Thanks for sharing your talent
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Princess Melody
Princess Melody in reply to rak03252: I love reading your poems
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EyzzBrown
EyzzBrown: The realm of pretend... someone's reality
your writing, Rak.
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denise362436
denise362436: you have a gift for writing lovely poems . so nice to read them x
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Mollie4
Mollie4: ^5 Rak
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betsymilo421
betsymilo421: Great job
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TraehA
TraehA: Living on the edge of a teeter totter realm of pretend...trying grasping to stay sane in an insane world 💗💗✌
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Bri_anna
Bri_anna in reply to TraehA: This world seems to be insane currently, I agree
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