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rak03252: rak03252: saw Keith's post...NOBODY..reminded me of this olde one i wrote some time ago...




NOBODY©
by rak

there’s nobody
just some crumbs
and we’re going back
from whence we’ve come
like a picture
nobody sees
you just close your eyes
set it free
you just close your eyes
fade away
and you drift right in
to yesterday

fold your arms
in deep trance
cross your feet for
the final dance
over flames
that burn so bright
you nod your head,
eternal light

your reflection blending
as the shadows fold
into youthful truthfulness
there’s nobody old


NOBODY

there’s nobody
just an empty hole
in axis rotation
there’s a vacant shoal
as a crawling serpent
claws and writhes
you can overtake one
of many lives

you can listen closely
or be cast adrift
and rummage blindly
for that missing gift
if you feel desire
or become afraid
there’s a secret breeze
and a serenade
humming gently
for that mass of masses
and the congregation
now at once classless

you can’t claim knowledge
with a stranglehold
we’re all infant adults
there’s nobody old
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denise362436
denise362436: Another great post . been waiting for this for awhile x
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kindofmagic
kindofmagic: More than lovely. Simply amazing
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Princess Melody
Princess Melody: Lovely poem
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Mollie4
Mollie4: Very nice. Thanks for sharing
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KeithJ 3 years ago ReplyReport
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HoneyMoon_
HoneyMoon_: Lovely indeed
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Chele1L
Chele1L: Nice
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Bri_anna
Bri_anna: all din poesi är helt enkelt spektakulär

This shouldn't be too difficult to translate? .... I'll give ya a clue ... It's Swedish
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rak03252
rak03252: (i think i gets it )
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Bri_anna
Bri_anna in reply to rak03252: easy peasy right
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SunshineDeb
SunshineDeb: Thats beautifully written, rak
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allaboutbeck
allaboutbeck: Keep going..I want to read MORE and MORE !
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TraehA
TraehA: 👍💗
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