darkie09 Offline

61 Widow/Widower Female from Dortmund       204
         

The E-mail

It's a hard day's night
sitting here, smoking, staring at the screen

I'm so confused, don't know what to do
I have always been sure of myself but now this self confidence is gone

So many unspoken words
and I dont find a single word to start with

Am I right, am I wrong?
shall I write to you, shall I stay calm?

I look out of the window
try to find an answer in the cold and starry night

All I can hear is silence
but then I look into the gracious face of the full moon

A soft whisper reaches my ears
I smile, and then I start writing the mail:

My love.........

M.F. 2011-11-10
Zoey234
Zoey234: this is great ... reader feels like they're there with you ...
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massimino
massimino: always nice and deepest your thoughts and words
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darkie09
darkie09: To Zoey: ty for understanding
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darkie09
darkie09: Massimo, thanks for your comment. Long time not seen, hope youre doing good
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ZEITGEIST MARIUS
ZEITGEIST MARIUS: come on darkie your friends support you
the lyrics sound sad
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PaleBurnedAcid
PaleBurnedAcid: doubt and confusion.. I understand that so well. But don't let anyone knock your confidence, you are a strong intelligent amazing woman. Some people are like cancer and should be cut from out lives
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Andressco
Andressco: wow very well written bella.
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darkie09
darkie09: In reply to Marius: no Marius, not sad, but thoughtful. Im sometimes in this mood, when I have to say a lot, but dont find the right words,. But after a while, and somehow with the help of the universe, I do know what to say. Ty for our friendship hun,
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darkie09
darkie09: Pale, I know that im strong, but sometimes I need some time to think about my words or actions. Just to find out the right way for me
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ZEITGEIST MARIUS
ZEITGEIST MARIUS: i understand you very well darkie.i am the same but having friends it will be more easy
thank you too for your freindship
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