In This Thread [we rhyme] (Page 3) (Post deleted by harlett )  Stewart75: The name on this thread… suggests it’s about rhyme… Though I’m yet to see any… except of course mine And the worst of the lot… is Jester, the cry baby… Is he a man or a mouse… or an angry old lady? I offered him help… good advice that I gave… Though then he gets nasty… and digs his own grave The funny thing is… he thinks he can write… As we laugh at this dick… us/all on this site If this thread was instead… about the biggest loser… Then he’d win it hands down… I’d buy him drink at the boozer Though all please resume… with this thread that he hosts… I suggest you think hard… before committing your posts As I'll soon be back… to critique all your lines… Cos’ the rest of your crap… showed negative signs So look straight ahead… though don’t tunnel vision… Focus your aim… your thoughts, and your mission  Stewart75: It's clear to see that CalyGrampa's pink suit is turning into a shade of envious green... And when will he ever do a post without editing...? Geez......... calybonos: envious...bahahahahaha! yeah...im envious because I had no idea that 'baby' rhymed with 'lady'...and vision with mission. what a schmoe Stewart75: Hmmm... well it's obvious you have no idea about poetry... though it's nice to see at least one of your posts done without it's usual edits... good work!!!... ... then again, maybe I'm praising you prematurely, as you are renowned from making edits... hours, days, even weeks after... Though congrats as we speak...
calybonos: If you were confident in your abilties,you would issue a rhyming challenge to me. But we know you're all talk and no walk..... Poor Rainman may be we-tah-dead...but he aint tupid yeeeeah....But not on Monday...defintely not on Monday....yeeeeah.. Uh oh fart!........Uh oh fart!..........yeeeeeah.. Stewart75: A challenge to you...? LMFAO... ... now that it funny... My man, you can't even string two lines together without phuckin' it up... then followed by the every post edit... ... like, I'd be waiting a week to determine when you've actually finished... lolsss calybonos: Same old dance around the ring from you eh rainman?...whatsamatta?.. Chicken can cluck but he can't peck?.....lolsss calybonos: You know,talkin to you might not be so bad if for once you could say something funny. ....blah blah...arselicker....blah blah...lolss...blah blah...too easy....blah blah..zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Stewart75: You're talking to yourself again Grampa... chill, relax.. k...? Okay, here's the deal... I'll give you a one week head start... to write your dull shit... then when you've actually finished... and all editing is done... ... call me... Then I'll do mine in less than five minutes... deal...?... Comrade_: C'mon don't be so offended Stewart75, you can't take a bit of criticism? So what if your rhymes don't hit the bar (aka sucks) get over it. Chillax. Go put on that green suit and write some more. Stewart75: Have you been snooping again Uncle Jack Kravitz... ... nah, of course not... like, you do have a life away from Wire, right...?... lolsss Comrade_: Dude, I just came online. Not surprised I find you the same place I left you ie on Off-Topic trolling. Who am I addressing here...Stewart75 or the Green man (there's a riddle for you). Dropping some advice; bring your rhymes up to standard if you wish to play the critic of everyone's rhymes. Stewart75: SUURREE you just came online... man you're a Wire addict... you never leave... ... anyways... laterz... Stewart75: Hmmm... well your life is dull... like, 24/7 Wire... Geez... good luck with that... ... and now another Edit fail... it must be noted... Anyways... bye for now... Comrade_: The funny part is, you're so narcissistic that even your insults are a reflection of yourself. Stroll up, you said you were leaving, why still here? Turning off the computer is simple (though your addiction might make it hard for you). shh shh now take a deep breath and click "shut down" Comrade_: You're still here muttering? haahahaha I got to go make breakfast and enjoy the rest of my Sunday. Stay here and hold the fort for me. Grazie Riddl..Stewart75. Laterz Stewart75: Can you hear me muttering Uncle Jack...? ... haahahaha finished breakfast... YET!!! lolsss Anyways, have fun on your midget bike... calybonos: Maybe he can hear you muttering the way you hear me "talking to yourself again Grampa" *pictures vain steward reading his own comments aloud to himself...over and over* | Off Topic Chat Room Similar Conversations |