Hello, I am doing this task in English, but I do not speak English, I would like to know if the grammar is good,

jonanotprick_20
jonanotprick_20: Hello, Good afternoon Professor and a warm greeting to all of you classmates.
Today, I'm going to talk about Psychological needs of adolescents
Adolescence is an important period in an individual's life, needs and problems influence their development to a large extent. Each teenager has certain needs, the satisfaction of them, is essential for the continuation of their physical and other aspects of development. A need is a tension within an organism that must be satisfied by the well-being of the organism. When a need is satisfied the tension is released, there are certain basic needs such as physiological and psychological needs.
Needs that are associated with an individual's socio-cultural environment are called secondary needs. They are acquired through social learning and their satisfaction is necessary for the psychological well-being of the individual. The important socio-psychological needs are as follows:
1. Safety needs: The adolescent needs emotional, social and economic stability, in addition to physical security. The person who lacks the sense of security can become maladaptive. The need for social security is associated with man's desire for gregariousness.

2. Need for love: love is one of the most basic psychological aspects Adolescent needs. Teens have a strong desire to love and be loved. The individual who is not loved will not have adequate concepts in relation to his own value.

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StarShines
StarShines: Very good! Especially for English not being your first language.

Here are some changes I would make:

Good afternoon Professor and a warm greeting to all of you classmates.
Today, I'm going to talk about Psychological needs of adolescents.
Adolescence is an important period in an individual's life. Needs and problems influence their development to a large extent. Each teenager has certain needs. The satisfaction of them is essential for the continuation of their physical development as well as other aspects of development. A need is a tension within an organism that must be satisfied for the well-being of the organism. When a need is satisfied the tension is released. There are certain basic needs such as physiological and psychological needs.
Needs that are associated with an individual's socio-cultural environment are called secondary needs. They are acquired through social learning and their satisfaction is necessary for the psychological well-being of the individual. The important socio-psychological needs are as follows:
1. Safety needs: The adolescent needs emotional, social, and economic stability. In addition to physical security. The person who lacks the sense of security can become maladaptive. The need for social security is associated with man's desire for gregariousness.

2. Need for love: Love is one of the most basic psychological aspects of Adolescent needs. Teens have a strong desire to love and be loved. The individual who is not loved will not have adequate concepts in relation to his own value.



Good luck with your paper!
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