 Friends         |  cupholder: I really like the sense lines. None of the revelations were received with punctuation or paragraphing, so it makes sense just to keep them as they were dictated, without punctation and kept as a whole thought. All of the revelations in the book of Doctrine and Covenants and in the Pearl of Great Price can be reformatted using the sense lines technique. I wonder if we'd find chiasmus in them if we did that, such as are found in the Book of Mormon? This now makes me want to re-write, or re-format the entire Standard Works in this manner and see if anything pops out of the text that I didn't notice before... 12 years ago • Reply • Report • Link Collapse Show Comments (1) 0  chooseausername1: it has a freshness and readability to it, the sense lines. It is remarkable how the original text, save for spell errors, is just the same as we have today. Not really, I guess, but it is good for us. 12 years ago • Reply • Report 0 |
