Do you see me?

CagedTears
CagedTears
New Member
do you see me?

scared and confused
angry and resentful
twisted storm brewing...

all i have done
nothing i have done
everything left to do...

screaming mute
clawing at stone walls
crimson pebbles at my feet...

darkness circles evermore
a cold so warm i sweat
stripping me completely naked...

HERE I AM!!!
can't you see me?
so raw...so vulnerable.....see me...
Posted: November 6 2009 05:13 PM 
COLDASEYES
COLDASEYES
New Member
welcome to my world,hope you find a way out
Posted: November 6 2009 07:59 PM 
man131988
man131988
New Member
hello my name is Atik and I am new here,

this was a really well written poem. Good job!
Posted: November 6 2009 10:15 PM 
CagedTears
CagedTears
New Member
thank you!
Posted: November 10 2009 08:58 AM 
gypsy
gypsy
Super Elite Member Lvl. 8
like u know me or something...i feel what ur saying..
Posted: November 10 2009 01:56 PM 
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