The story of the kingdom(from a book im writing)

In a far off land there was a kingdom of powerful warriors who trained in the ninja art. But what separated this kingdom from every one else was the fact that they had dragons to fight with them. When a child is born an egg is set a side for them and what ever hatches from the egg will be there dragon and only faith can bring the to together and they will be life bound to each other until death. Unlike the dragons most kingdoms believed in the dragons they had where made of the element they had control over. The mighty earth dragon made of stone and boulders nearly indestructible and could launch chunks of earth at there foes. The dangerous fire dragon whose breath was like burning air and could set fire to anything that’s to close to it. The graceful storm dragon could cause a thunder storm on the clearest day and make tornados form on the calmest day. The beautiful water dragon commanded the waters and could turn the calmest waters into a whirlpool or tsunami.

But they never used there powers to destroy the kingdom but to build and maintain the kingdom. The kings of the kingdom had other dragons like shadow, light or the least common ultimate dragon. Most of the kings where ruthless and greedy others never fought unless need to. The king Eldoren was one of the ruthless and concurred 13 kingdoms in his short life. King Louis the 1st was a kind king and never wronged any one even his prisoners and his life lived through when his son took the throne


Well what do u guys think?

sounds like a mix between eragon+avatar+naruto XD some tweeks and should b awesome though

dragons again...

so many books and movies made already about the subject...

can't see nothing new in there sorry to say...

why not try for example some more obscure mythical creatures for your story.

... and ninjas are not really the best choice of warriors for a field of battle (mostly they are spies and assassins)

... and instead of another clash among evil vs good or good king vs evil king i would try for example that all kings in that kingdom want the best for all people but one day all kings are murdered except one...

that king had nothing to do with the murders but since he is the only one that survived every son of the dead kings thinks he have done it...

the mythical creatures (no dragons please)living in that kingdom know that the kingdom is on a verge of a civil war and try to find a reason for this series of murders...

meanwhile the sons of the dead kings join forces to conquer the land of the "bloody" king ...

the mythical creatures so far only know that the king is telling the truth(he had nothing to do with the death of the other kings)...

some of the magical creatures decided to help the innocent king and his people in battle defending the land from destruction and blood sheed...

others magical creatures decided that they will not take part in any war...

many years later even after the "bloody" king died in one of the battles
there is no peace because now the sons of the innocent king want revenge from the great injustice made...

... and the war continued for many generations until only two of the magical creatures that helped the innocent king still remain (the others died in battle)...

those two magical creatures tired of so much destruction and endless violence create a plan to end the war once and for all...

EVERY ONE LIKES DRAGONS THAT Y THEY SELL XD... OVER THE YEARS NINJAS HAVE BEEN USED FOR MORE THAN SPIES AN ASSASINS (NARUTO,NINJA TURTLES ETC ETC)

AND ALL KINGS WANT WUTS BEST FOR THEIR PPL??? THOSE DIFFERENCES ON WUT THEY THINK IS BEST WUT WOULD LEAD TO A WAR.THEY WOULDNT JUST GET ALONG CUZ THEY THINK THEY HAVE A COMMON ENEMY. IF ANYTHING U WOULD HAVE SEVERAL FACTIONS BRAWLING IT OUT.


ALSO KILLIN OFF ALL THE MAGICAL CREATURES JUST LEADS TO A WORLD LIKE OURS...YAY READIN A FANTASY THAT BECOMES NORMAL

ezy...

sure dragons and ninjas sell a lot in anime and manga (naruto,ninja turtles,dragonball etc..)

if that´s what dragon prince want to do (screenplay to an anime instead of a book that migth work...)

about magical creatures in fantasy books i prefer quality over quantity...

THOSE R QUALITY TRAITS JUST GOTTA MAKE EM UR OWN