 lance_sir
Pinnacle of Awesome Lvl. 10
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yo the fact is/ the raps is/ what you ain't bringin/its time to wrap it up son/ you're finished/ your time is up son/ you be braggin that you're tough but yo, your rhymin sucks son/ so i got somethin for you to suck on/ and yo, your flow's vagina/ even though you never touched one/ yo just give it up dunn cause you're the one who's through/ while i be livin it up dunn like case and ja rule/ you gets no love/ from no one/ yo hold up/ you say you got speed and power but your flow is slowin up/ and that's sure enough/ so you might be rough and rugged/ but as far as open mics go, you're over and done with/ you as well as i know, that your flow is sluggish and rubbish/ yous a poor sport so you gonna start actin thuggish/ can't throw no punchlines so you gonna resort to throwin punches
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Posted: October 2 2009 05:28 PM / Edited: 10/2/2009 6:51:50 PM
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 $WillowMancHe$
Elite Member Lvl. 7
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its funny how u say my flow's is slowin up,
but u really ment to say was my flow's is slowin down,
its clearly, that this battle ain't finish yet,
error that u made, u ain't 100% ready,
this battle aint done, we just barely begun
that "thugish" u claim i be.. may sound good,
action speak louder then words, u show do put a
funny ass act, with the ja rule saying,
little that u know he got served by 50 cent, a time ago,
dont need no punch lines cause its useless to me,
but your lines.....just normal to me no affect,
that poor sport line u saying?
(aw) is that how u really felling, but all said an done
im uh toss u a quarter......cause all that u said
was a joke to me, good try..../
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Posted: October 8 2009 06:44 PM
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 lance_sir
Pinnacle of Awesome Lvl. 10
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good try?/ damn son, it took you long enough to reply/ its like you write a verse one week at a time/ you're damn right, your flow is slowin down/ so now i'm showin you how/ you should be throwin it down/ you will never be holdin the crown/ i already killed you, you belong in a hole in the ground/ cause you can't flow as fast as me/ or as advanced as me/ you say you don't need no punchlines, but you ain't got one to throw back at me/ you're nothin but trash to me/ and that's all you be puttin out actually/ you be sayin i'm a funny ass act?/ what about you with your ugly ass raps?/ you ain't nice or precise with the mic/ or with the lines that you write/ the rhymes you recite/ don't even rhyme/ and that's more than half of the time/ you be talkin all cocky/ soundin sloppy and choppy/ like a patient who be stricken with cerebral palsy/ you ain't got no flavor whatsoever/ your style is plain and not so clever/ you take forever/ just to come back with a verse/ what's worse/ is that its just half of a verse/ just accept the fact that you've been beat/ your raps ain't worth attaching to a beat/ you should be embarassed to even speak/ cause that fourth of a verse, took you almost a week to complete.
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Posted: October 10 2009 01:51 AM / Edited: 10/10/2009 3:58:30 AM
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 $WillowMancHe$
Elite Member Lvl. 7
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its funny how u say i took to long,
but you wouldn't know wat i do off this cyber world,
don't need a week to drop a line, i can do this anytime,
u killed me? (ha), im still alive, may be faster then me,
and advanced then me, but the truth of the matter is your still battling me,
saying im trash and whatsoever....but this trash man will still have u on your ass,
"still talking about the rhyme stuff", kid, u need to let it go,
never embarassed, I have a heart of a G,
i can take yo punchlines, but its sad to say...still ain't affected u see
im still in yo face, if im so bad at this battle thing.......
just yield to me, then its over with/
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Posted: October 10 2009 09:17 PM
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 lance_sir
Pinnacle of Awesome Lvl. 10
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you want it to be over with/ as if you're over it/ but you're under it/ cause you suck at this/ and yes, you are really, really bad at this battle thing/ i don't care what you do out of this cyber world, but i hope it ain't battling/ cause you'd get ate in the battle ring/ you say you have the heart of a G/ that don't mean you know the art of an MC/ you say i talk about rhymin too much/ but that's because you ain't rhymin enough/ yo, i could let it go/ maybe, if you could incorporate some rhymes into your flow/ but since you don't/ i can compare your rap to a RUNNY NOSE or a HOE/ cause IT BLOWS!/ and yo, why would i yield to you?/ when what you actually need, is a shield for you/ so you don't get SICK when you get dissed, cause i'm too ILL for you/ and yo, i did kill you fool/ you just can't admit the truth/ i would never believe you if you told me you get in the booth.
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Posted: October 13 2009 05:29 AM / Edited: 10/13/2009 5:55:29 AM
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 KINGmonkeyADDICT
VIP Member Lvl. 5
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read yo shit/dont feel it/2 fast 2 slow,2 ass holes, b@%wy dis/ny$x^ dat I mudda fkkerz s where its @ boy got girl/girl loves boy,n%zwx got shit,but dont cry breath me in/now blow me out,listen up fools,aint no doubt past was/is no more,girl you got bro aint nuthing butta.........
past 4 you/past 4 her,hold that thought coz aint no more shes here 4 me/not 4 he,she knows what she likes bro...im sory pain is hard/pain is good,pain is your girl walking to my neigbour hood.. she knows me/boys know shit,all above in pipe n smoke it,, so dats me out/in yur face your old girl be in my place.. an n%w~% ny@%x nigganigga pleaze dont you think you getting of free this yo shop/dont sell rap dont take bad,ur raps crap aint yo fault/aint no blame,wanna point,,gods his name..
so princess/im talkin ta you,i king need you.. fell no pain/fkkk shame,that boy aint shit, fools insane, look me up n add me now/caz im a show u how shit goze down..
boys bring yur pain,caz if i see uz again,ima hurt youz d same smile mudda fkkkrz n say cheeze,you jst been fkkkd by monkey diseaze... king of/not kong,gutter rappin jungle song. out of nuts peace
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Posted: November 2 2009 03:40 PM
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 lance_sir
Pinnacle of Awesome Lvl. 10
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out of nuts? nobody needs them anyway/ please keep your monkey diseases away/ yo you want to hear somethin funny?/ you call yourself KINGmonkey/ you monkey you ain't a king for nothin/ and you ain't makin money/ so why you talkin like you be scoopin honeys?/ they either gots to be literally monkeys or lookin stupid ugly/ yous a dummy/ what thinks you could come here/ and try to disrespect?/ and get a rep/ when all you're doing is talkin a whole lot of sh!t/ and boring us to death/ with that and oh yeah, also the halitosis on your breath/ yo go get some mouth wash/ so you can come back and try to sound fresh/ cause you couldn't get a crowd hype even with a pound of meth
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Posted: November 4 2009 02:37 PM / Edited: 11/4/2009 2:44:55 PM
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 $WillowMancHe$
Elite Member Lvl. 7
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haaa, homeboy just served u, ha now its
my turn to, bring that action , show u whats happenin,
sayin that n%~^% stuff may sound all tough,
but its funny, u on the other side of the globe,
u couldn't take me on this turf, have yo ass beat &
locked up like a animal, toss u bannana tho,
have ya crying for your family tho, saying u the King?
pfff, im laughing now, aint no king to me
just a pretender & a faker
rather watch them lakers , u the monkey with the HIV
with all said and done you'll be put
to sleep in a heart beat wit the jungle music runin
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Posted: November 4 2009 03:11 PM / Edited: 11/5/2009 12:35:35 PM
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 HERB
Pinnacle of Awesome Lvl. 10
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wow
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Posted: November 5 2009 11:04 AM
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 $WillowMancHe$
Elite Member Lvl. 7
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gotta make a move cuzz u its true sporting that blue well u know its coo
i return to this battle thang to put u
to school, but once when im done with u,
you'll remain a fool, still sound like the
rest who trys to test but gets beat by the best
ends up into a battle fest, never ever take me
out this game cause at the end...i'll put u
to shame & take the fame
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Posted: November 10 2009 12:56 PM
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